Overview/Purpose:
Students revise their commentaries to add comparisons.
Guiding Questions:
- How can adding comparisons strengthen our commentaries?
Recommended Time:
45 minutes
Lesson Design:
- Explain that good persuasive writers use comparisons to support their claims.
- Comparisons can…
1. Be written as similes
2. Be written as metaphors
3. Use hyperbole
- Ask students to find examples of comparisons in the Commentary Packet.
- Share discovered examples.
- Students find places in their drafts where they might be able to add effective and compelling comparisons as support.
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